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Is this sentence logical

Is this sentence logical? It will be used for advertasing.

"Free Starbucks Gift Cards at his 40th Anniversary Celebration!"

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Hi. It's a logical sentence, but if you mean the 40th anniversary of Starbucks then you should say "at their 40th anniversary celebration" rather than "his". If you say "his" that would mean only one person was celebrating his anniversary.

  • Hi.
  • It's a logical sentence, but if you mean the 40th anniversary of Starbucks then you should say "at their 40th anniversary celebration" rather than "his".
  • If you say "his" that would mean only one person was celebrating his anniversary.
  • Hope this helps, Clodpole
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Hi.

It's a logical sentence, but if you mean the 40th anniversary of Starbucks then you should say "at their 40th anniversary celebration" rather than "his".

If you say "his" that would mean only one person was celebrating his anniversary.

Hope this helps,

Clodpole

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