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Fengguanyupeter Posted 17 years ago
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sentence: The sense of happiness may not increase with your wealth increasing.

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I would say The sense of happiness may not increase proportionally with your wealth

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I would say

The sense of happiness may not increase proportionally with your wealth
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Your sense of happiness may not increase with your increasing wealth.

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