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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this sentence is correct?

Hi Sam,

Jacob called me to infom youthat to call him back as he want to discuss regarding house construction.

or

hi sam,

Jacob had called me to inform you that to call him back regarding house construction
  

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Hi, Too wordy and awkward. If you are writing this to Sam, just say eg Jakob called. He'd like you to call him regarding house construction.

— Clive

  • Hi, Too wordy and awkward.
  • If you are writing this to Sam, just say eg Jakob called.
  • He'd like you to call him regarding house construction.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Too wordy and awkward.

If you are writing this to Sam, just say

eg Jakob called. He'd like you to call him regarding house construction.

Clive
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