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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence impolite?

Please help to modify it in more polite




The 1st shipment for 6,000 pcs AV179 is ready to ship, we shall only ship after collecting your payment.
  

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Hi, Please help to modify it in more polite The 1st shipment for 6,000 pcs AV179 is ready to ship, we shall only ship after collecting your payment. 6,000 pcs AV179 are ready for shipment, as soon as we have received payment. Best wishes, Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, Please help to modify it in more polite The 1st shipment for 6,000 pcs AV179 is ready to ship, we shall only ship after collecting your payment.
  • 6,000 pcs AV179 are ready for shipment, as soon as we have received payment.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

Please help to modify it in more polite



The 1st shipment for 6,000 pcs  AV179 is ready to ship, we shall only ship after collecting your payment.



6,000 pcs  AV179 are ready for shipment, as soon as we have received payment.

Best wishes, Clive
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