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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically worded?

The supplier also has tried to deliver the table lamps with the above order, but the lamp shades were found to be damaged upon inspection, so we returned them to the supplier.

  

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The supplier also tried to deliver the table lamps with the above order, but upon inspection the lamp shades were found to be damage d s o we returned them to the supplier . also tried You are just talking about a simple past event. upon inspection The original version sounded like the inspection caused the damage.

  • The supplier also tried to deliver the table lamps with the above order, but upon inspection the lamp shades were found to be damage d s o we returned them to the supplier .
  • also tried You are just talking about a simple past event.
  • upon inspection The original version sounded like the inspection caused the damage.
  • damage d s o You don't need a comma.
  • It flows better without one.
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The supplier also tried to deliver the table lamps with the above order, but upon inspection the lamp shades were found to be damaged so we returned them to the supplier.

also tried You are just talking about a simple past event.

upon inspection The original version sounded like the inspection caused the damage.

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