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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically sound?

W hereby confirm that we have not yet received this item. Even their packing list didn't show that it was packed and shipped on pallet #11 as they claimed.
  

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Anonymous W e hereby confirm

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Anonymous We hereby confirm
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AnonymousW hereby confirm that we have not yet received this item. Even their packing list didn't show that it was packed and shipped on pallet #11 as they claimed.
You don't need the first part; it is a waste of the reader's patience. The rest needs tightening. Business communications should be concise and direct. Time is money.

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