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SHD Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct and natural?

The floor lamp received was found to be defective. Its stem was not straight, slanted outward by 4 cm.

Please tell me if the sentence above is worded correctly.

  

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Suggestion: The floor lamp received was found to be defective. Its stem was not straight ; it was slanted outward by 4 cm. CJ

  • Suggestion: The floor lamp received was found to be defective.
  • Its stem was not straight ; it was slanted outward by 4 cm.
  • CJ
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Suggestion:

The floor lamp received was found to be defective. Its stem was not straight; it was slanted outward by 4 cm.

CJ

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