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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

We require 4-pin XLR male connectors in order to connect to the transformer and the series connection between lights.

  

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I am not sure I understand it, but I think that it is not grammatical. It seems like you're saying that you need those connectors for two things, but if so, you have not made them grammatically parallel. " That does not make good electrical sense, but like I said, I am not sure that you are expressing your meaning clearly.

  • I am not sure I understand it, but I think that it is not grammatical.
  • It seems like you're saying that you need those connectors for two things, but if so, you have not made them grammatically parallel.
  • " That does not make good electrical sense, but like I said, I am not sure that you are expressing your meaning clearly.
  • You might want to mention how many you need.
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I am not sure I understand it, but I think that it is not grammatical. It seems like you're saying that you need those connectors for two things, but if so, you have not made them grammatically parallel. I would change it to "We require 4-pin XLR male connectors in order to connect to the transformer and for the series connection between lights."

You might mean that the two things are no

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