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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Please let us know the update on the items transfetred temporarily to your stores last week as per your request.
  

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Please let us know the update on the items transfetred transferred temporarily to your stores last week as per your request. Yes, it's correct grammar, but it doesn't sound good. let us know the update This is not a natural expression.

— Clive

  • Please let us know the update on the items transfetred transferred temporarily to your stores last week as per your request.
  • Yes, it's correct grammar, but it doesn't sound good.
  • let us know the update This is not a natural expression.
  • as per your request.
  • This is tired business jargon.
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Please let us know the update on the items transfetred transferred temporarily to your stores last week as per your request.

Yes, it's correct grammar, but it doesn't sound good.

let us know the update This is not a natural expression.

as per your request. This is tired business jargon.

it's usually a good idea for learners of English to avoid

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