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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

As requested by the client representative, we carefully removed the external wooden packing of the furniture and kept all them in the premises with its individual packing.

  

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] in the premises with its individual packing . You removed the packing and kept it with its packing? Something is wrong here.

— CalifJim

  • ] in the premises with its individual packing .
  • You removed the packing and kept it with its packing?
  • Something is wrong here.
  • Do you mean you kept the furniture with its packing?
  • It's unclear what 'all them' refers to.
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anonymous

As requested by the client representative, we carefully removed the external wooden packing of the furniture and kept [all them ?] in the premises with its individual packing.

You removed the packing and kept it with its packing?

Something is wrong here. Do you mean you kept the furniture

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