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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Please see the email trail below regarding the patch module issues which we have highlighted and asked for solution to set in the system to prevent the patch modules adding automatically.

  

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You are trying to say too much in a single sentence. I suggest this. Please see the email trail below regarding the patch module issues which we have highlighted.

— Clive

  • You are trying to say too much in a single sentence.
  • I suggest this.
  • Please see the email trail below regarding the patch module issues which we have highlighted.
  • We have asked for a correction to add to the system to prevent the patch modules adding automatically.
  • Is this your intended meaning?
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You are trying to say too much in a single sentence. I suggest this.

Please see the email trail below regarding the patch module issues which we have highlighted.

We have asked for a correction to add to the system to prevent the patch modules adding automatically.

Is this your intended meaning?

Clive

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