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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

The power supply units were found to be damaged due to poor workmanship. It seems that they have done a wrong connection; otherwise this wouldn't happened like this.

  

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No. Damage is due to some external cause, eg you drop a unit. Also, be less wordy.

  • No.
  • Damage is due to some external cause, eg you drop a unit.
  • Also, be less wordy.
  • The power supply units were found to be faulty.
  • It seems that they have an incorrect connection.
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No.

Damage is due to some external cause, eg you drop a unit.

Also, be less wordy.


The power supply units were found to be faulty. It seems that they have an incorrect connection.

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