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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Is it natural?

The Longest Human Chain Record, which took place in Eastern Europe, marked the largest number of participants in the 20th century with two millions of participants involved in 1989.

  

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No. One problem is that you need to distinguish between the record and the event. I suggest this.

  • No.
  • One problem is that you need to distinguish between the record and the event.
  • I suggest this.
  • The record-winning longest human chain was formed in 1999 in Eastern Europe.
  • Two million people took part, which was the largest number of participants in the 20th century.
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No.

One problem is that you need to distinguish between the record and the event.

I suggest this.

The record-winning longest human chain was formed in 1999 in Eastern Europe. Two million people took part, which was the largest number of participants in the 20th century.

Clive

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