Is this sentence grammatically correct?
I'm practicing writing a fiction using imagery of dark and light. Inspired by Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet.
Your school is so bright so that I can't be with you. My school is so dark: We can't be together.
We can be together at the park where dark and light can be met.
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Most of this is correct English, though the imagery seems somewhat intriguing, intentionally or otherwise. I imagine that you probably mean "can meet" rather than "can be met". Some people might object to the use of a capital after the colon.
- Most of this is correct English, though the imagery seems somewhat intriguing, intentionally or otherwise.
- I imagine that you probably mean "can meet" rather than "can be met".
- Some people might object to the use of a capital after the colon.
- Personally I am OK with this style, but others may not consider it standard modern English.
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Most of this is correct English, though the imagery seems somewhat intriguing, intentionally or otherwise.
I imagine that you probably mean "can meet" rather than "can be met".
Some people might object to the use of a capital after the colon. Personally I am OK with this style, but others may not consider it standard modern English.
0interesting writing
fiction is an uncountable noun, so don't say 'a fiction'.
Say eg 'some fiction' or 'a piece of fiction'.
Keep on writing!
Clive
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