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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

When I signed up to serve this country joining the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to the unit that was deploying right after I got to the unit.
  

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When I signed up to serve this country in the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to a unit that was deploying right after I joined it.

— Mister Micawber

  • When I signed up to serve this country in the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away.
  • I didn't know anything.
  • I could have been assigned to a unit that was deploying right after I joined it.
  • The grammar is now OK, but it is very redundant.
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When I signed up to serve this country in the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to a unit that was deploying right after I joined it.

The grammar is now OK, but it is very redundant.
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