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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?
Further to the e-mail below, we need to ship back the items as in the packing list to the supplier
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It is understandable, but very stilted language. Business emails should be clear and professional. So you need to state your request first, indicate that the packing list for the definitive list is attached, and refer to the prior email for reasons.
- It is understandable, but very stilted language.
- Business emails should be clear and professional.
- So you need to state your request first, indicate that the packing list for the definitive list is attached, and refer to the prior email for reasons.
- We need to ship the items on the packing list (attached) back to the supplier.
- See the email below for the background and reasons for this.
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It is understandable, but very stilted language. Business emails should be clear and professional.
So you need to state your request first, indicate that the packing list for the definitive list is attached, and refer to the prior email for reasons.
We need to ship the items on the packing list (attached) back to the supplier. See the email below for the background and reasons for this.
So you need to state your request first, indicate that the packing list for the definitive list is attached, and refer to the prior email for reasons.
We need to ship the items on the packing list (attached) back to the supplier. See the email below for the background and reasons for this.
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