Is this sentence grammatically correct?

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Last week, we have replaced the existing lampshade of wall lamp in the living hall at main building with new one received. Here is the image of new lampshade with the wall lamp for your reference.

Mr. Tom · Accepted Answer

This is how I would write it.

Last week, we replaced the old?? lampshade of the wall lamp in the living hall at main building with a new one. Here is the image of the new lampshade with the wall lamp for your reference.

Let's wait for a native speaker's take on this.

Tom

Anonymous · Answer

Mr. Tomliving hall

You could write living room or, just hall. Choose one of the underlined parts.

CalifJim · Answer

AnonymousLast week, we have replaced

Oof! Here's a mistake already. In English we don't combine a mention of the time (last week) with the present perfect tense (have replaced). You need to remove "have". Last week we replaced... Note also that you don't need the comma.

Anonymousthe existing lampshade of wall lamp

All you need here is "the old lampshade". I doubt that a mention of exactly which lamp the shade was on is crucial to your message.

Anonymousin the living hall at main building

You might even leave this out. I suspect you mean "in the main lobby", however, so you could use that.

Anonymouswith new one received.

with the new one is enough. Don't forget "the".

AnonymousHere is the image of new lampshade with the wall lamp for your reference.

Here is a [picture / photo] of it for your reference.
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With all the changes recommended:

Last week we replaced the old lampshade (in the main lobby) with the new one. Here is a photo of it for your reference.

CJ

Clive · Answer

I would simplify further.
Last week we replaced the lampshade (in the main lobby). Here is a photo.

CalifJim · Answer

Clive simplify further

Good point.

CJ

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