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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Please find below the details of account number for the following staff member who has applied for a bank account.
  

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It is quite a messy sentence. Something like this is better: Mr. Abdu Hassan, a staff member, has applied for a bank account.

  • It is quite a messy sentence.
  • Something like this is better: Mr.
  • Abdu Hassan, a staff member, has applied for a bank account.
  • Here are the details relating to this transaction: Account Number: 9999999-1 Name on account: *** X *** Co-signer: etc.
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It is quite a messy sentence. Something like this is better:

Mr. Abdu Hassan, a staff member, has applied for a bank account. Here are the details relating to this transaction:

Account Number: 9999999-1
Name on account: *** X ***
Co-signer:
etc.

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