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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct??

Please tell me if this sentence is grammatically correct or not.

"Staring at the twinkling stars in the sky, I wish my hope of helping people in poverty can be like a star, enlightening others’ skies."

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Not quite. Gazing at the twinkling stars in the sky, I hope my helping people in poverty can be like a star, brightening others’ skies.

  • Not quite.
  • Gazing at the twinkling stars in the sky, I hope my helping people in poverty can be like a star, brightening others’ skies.
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Not quite.

Gazing at the twinkling stars in the sky, I hope my helping people in poverty can be like a star, brightening others’ skies.

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