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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Our company provides several kinds of security and fleet management tracking products responding to the market demands.
  

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Because there is very good opportunity for me and more then facility comparatively for this job.

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  • Because there is very good opportunity for me and more then facility comparatively for this job.
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Because there is very good opportunity for me and more then facility comparatively for this job.
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Yes, but it is rather lackadaisical for ad copy. Try this:

Our company provides state-of-the-art security and fleet management tracking products.
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Because there is very good opportunity for me and more then facility comparatively for this job.-- This is an incomplete sentence and I do not understand the meaning. Please explain.
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how do you say?: responding to the market demands or responding to market demands.
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@ Mister Micawber : I want to say that, our company is producing products that today's market needs.
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Then use something like this. Obviously you are not producing what is not needed.

Our company provides the finest security and fleet management tracking products.
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