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Flower1234 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

After consideration of the job responsibilities, I don't think this is the job that I would like to do on a permanent basis.
  

Top answer

' sounds better.

  • ' sounds better.
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'After considering the job oppurtunities, I don't think this is the job that I would like to do on a permanent basis.' sounds better.
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Hi.

I respectfully diagree with you vvr_07, changing responsibility to opportunity make a substantial change to the meaning, therefore it should be avoided.

As for the sentence I suggest something like;

Having considered the responsibilities this job involves, I don't think if it is the one that I would like to have(hold/carry out)
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The grammar is okay but it's far from natural sounding. Here is a better version: After consideration of its responsibilities I don't think this is a job that I can accept.
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hrsanei

I'm extremely sorry. I didn't mean to change responsibility to oppurtunity. I did it by mistake. Please forgive me.

My sentence was 'Having considered the job responsibilities, I don't think it is the one I would like to do on a permanent basis.' Does this sound ok?

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