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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

I analyze research data to aid the sales team increase sales revenue, grow prospect client list, and provide pertinent data for the clients’ needs.
  

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I analyze research data to help the sales team increase / aid the sales team in increasing revenue, grow the prospective client list, and provide pertinent data for clients.

— Mister Micawber

  • I analyze research data to help the sales team increase / aid the sales team in increasing revenue, grow the prospective client list, and provide pertinent data for clients.
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I analyze research data to help the sales team increase / aid the sales team in increasing revenue, grow the prospective client list, and provide pertinent data for clients.
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