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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Is this sentence grammatically correct

Greetings we would like to make an appointment and meet up to discuss our Corporate Travel program.
  

Top answer

Keep it short and simple. Consider: Greetings. We would like to make an appointment to discuss our Corporate Travel program.

— JohnParis

  • Keep it short and simple.
  • Consider: Greetings.
  • We would like to make an appointment to discuss our Corporate Travel program.
  • Could you provide me with a list of dates and times that would be convenient for you to meet with us?
  • Kind regards, ***
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Keep it short and simple.

Consider:

Greetings. We would like to make an appointment to discuss our Corporate Travel program. Could you provide me with a list of dates and times that would be convenient for you to meet with us? Kind regards, ***
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I prefer this:

Greetings! We would like to make an appointment to discuss our Corporate Travel Program.
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That would be fine, but I would not use an exclamation mark after the word 'greetings'. It looks as if you are shouting.

Consider:

Dear, Mr. X,

We would like to make an appointment to discuss our Corporate Travel Program.
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