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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

She has earned a reputation that affords her a host of longstanding patients that she does not deserve to lose over bureaucratic red tape.
  

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Essentially correct, but rather awkward. Her reputation has afforded her a host of longstanding patients whom she does not deserve to lose through bureaucratic red tape.

  • Essentially correct, but rather awkward.
  • Her reputation has afforded her a host of longstanding patients whom she does not deserve to lose through bureaucratic red tape.
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Essentially correct, but rather awkward.

Her reputation has afforded her a host of longstanding patients whom she does not deserve to lose through bureaucratic red tape.

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