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Abraxas25 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Hi; new user here.

I found this sentence on the internet and the em dash and the conjunction 'that' both confuse me:

'I must relate that I've never met a person whose intellect I respected or whose philosophical learning was more than amateur -- that I never knew such a person to take Nietzsche seriously.'

Is it grammatically correct?

Thanks.
  

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Hi, brax, thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums. I was never quite sure of the rules for the dash, but in my opinion the sentence is okay.

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Hi, brax, thanks for joining us. Welcome to English Forums.

I was never quite sure of the rules for the dash, but in my opinion the sentence is okay. The form is:
"I would like to say that you're beautiful and alluring -- that you're dazzling."

Best regards, - A.
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Thanks for replying. Emotion: smile

The difference that makes the sentence I quoted harder for me to understand is that the part after th
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Hi,

I found this sentence on the internet and the em dash and the conjunction 'that' both confuse me:




'I must relate that I've never met a person whose intellect I respected or whose philosophical learning was more than amateur -- that I never knew such a person to take Nietzsche seriously.'

I'd like to comment that I find this sentence unsa
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'I must relate that I've never met a person whose intellect I respected or whose philosophical learning was more than amateur -- that I never knew such a person to take Nietzsche seriously.'

Hmmm, you ask me about the dash and the "that" conjunction, and whether the grammar is correct - now you're gonna hit me with symantics?
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Hello,

In the first part personA is talking about Nietzche

dash and "that"

In this part author talks about personA.

This is very common usage in the books." That " is a kind of tailing of writer's feelings ideas,it is like writer/author starts talking from 3rd mouth in the book.

I hope this may help.
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sunsail In the first part personA is talking about Nietzsche
You know, you may have a point there. I wonder if prior context would reveal the first part to be a Nietzsche quote and the second part to be a humorous retort?
CJ has a Nietzsche quote on his avatar. I wonder if they ever met? Well, I guess not. He died a year before I was born.
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I also don't find the sentence satisfactory, but I think (although I could be way off base) that the author meant "[any person I've ever met who falls into the category of being intellectual and having more than an amateur understanding] didn't take Nietzsche seriously."

What he wrote was that he never met anyone who fell into that category at all. It would take a pretty conceited person
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Grammar Geek It would take a pretty conceited person to think he'd never met such a person, wouldn't it?
That's why I thought the words might be Nietzsche's.
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Abraxas25
'I must relate that I've never met a person whose intellect I respected or whose philosophical learning was more than amateur -- that I never knew such a person to take Nietzsche seriously.'


I hate this sentence. The dash could be okay, but the entire sentence is pompous and awkward. It is designed to prove that the writer is int
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'I must relate that I've never met a person whose intellect I respected or whose philosophical learning was more than amateur -- that I never knew such a person to take Nietzsche seriously.'

Well,
I do not know where this text was taken,it would be nice to know that.Probably it's from a book,fiction,play,radio play etc

I imagined 2 scenarios,let's say all these people are i

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