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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this sentence grammatical?

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Is this sentence grammatical? If not, how can I change it?

Therefore, we request the organisation in cooperation with the child protection authorities of Great Britain to address the issue of providing Jane Smith with psychological assistance, preventing any type of violence risks against the child and returning the child to Germany

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Therefore, we request the organisation , in cooperation with the child protection authorities of Great Britain , to address the issue of providing Jane Smith with psychological assistance, removing any risk of violence to risks against the child and returning the child to Germany .

  • Therefore, we request the organisation , in cooperation with the child protection authorities of Great Britain , to address the issue of providing Jane Smith with psychological assistance, removing any risk of violence to risks against the child and returning the child to Germany .
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Therefore, we request the organisation, in cooperation with the child protection authorities of Great Britain, to address the issue of providing Jane Smith with psychological assistance, removing any risk of violence to risks against the child and returning the child to Germany.
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