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Bn77 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammatical?

Is the following sentence grammatical?

You will find attached a package of documents, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.
  

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Hi; "You will find" is rather clumsy. This is more direct: Attached to this email is a set of documents, including a draft of your contract and a handbook. And this is more personal and friendly: I have attached a set of documents to this email, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.

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  • Hi; "You will find" is rather clumsy.
  • This is more direct: Attached to this email is a set of documents, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.
  • And this is more personal and friendly: I have attached a set of documents to this email, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.
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Hi;

"You will find" is rather clumsy.
This is more direct:
Attached to this email is a set of documents, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.

And this is more personal and friendly:
I have attached a set of documents to this email, including a draft of your contract and a handbook.
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so it's not wrong but just clumsy?
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Bn77so it's not wrong but just clumsy?
Correct. It's not wrong, but I never use this expression.
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