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Ppan Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
is this sentence grammartically okay
"With nearly 50,000 alumni worldwide, the school's alumni network will be an asset in helping me achieve my short term and long term career objectives after I graduate from the school."
Is there a better way to express the same idea?
thanks
/P
Is there a better way to express the same idea?
thanks
/P
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Hi, Well, there are always different ways to say things. What you have is reasonable, but I suggest you avoid repetition (alumni, school). Here's my suggestion.
- Hi, Well, there are always different ways to say things.
- What you have is reasonable, but I suggest you avoid repetition (alumni, school).
- Here's my suggestion.
- " Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
Well, there are always different ways to say things. What you have is reasonable, but I suggest you avoid repetition (alumni, school). Here's my suggestion.
"The school's network of nearly 50,000 alumni worldwide is an asset that will help me achieve both my short-term and long-term career objectives after I graduate."
Well, there are always different ways to say things. What you have is reasonable, but I suggest you avoid repetition (alumni, school). Here's my suggestion.
"The school's network of nearly 50,000 alumni worldwide is an asset that will help me achieve both my short-term and long-term career objectives after I graduate."
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