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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence grammarly correct ? Is the comma in the right place?

O’Brien depicts that during the Vietnam War, soldiers did horrendous acts without a purpose.
  

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'Depicts' and 'did' are wrong word choices. No comma is needed. O’Brien indicates/writes/shows/admits that during the Vietnam War soldiers committed horrendous acts without a purpose.

— Mister Micawber

  • 'Depicts' and 'did' are wrong word choices.
  • No comma is needed.
  • O’Brien indicates/writes/shows/admits that during the Vietnam War soldiers committed horrendous acts without a purpose.
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'Depicts' and 'did' are wrong word choices. No comma is needed.

O’Brien indicates/writes/shows/admits that during the Vietnam War soldiers committed horrendous acts without a purpose.
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