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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence gramatically correct?

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Is this sentence gramatically correct?

Information is being gathered and broken down according to age and gender of the child victim, as well as according to his or her relationships with the abuser.


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Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim, as well as according to his or her relationship with the abuser. I think I prefer this version. Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim and his or her relationship with the abuser.

— Clive

  • Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim, as well as according to his or her relationship with the abuser.
  • I think I prefer this version.
  • Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim and his or her relationship with the abuser.
  • Clive
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Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim, as well as according to his or her relationship with the abuser.

I think I prefer this version.

Information is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim and his or her
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AnonymousInformation is being gathered and broken down according to the age and gender of the child victim, as well as according to his or her relationships with the abuser.
Grammatically correct as shown. But there's also this possibility:

Data is being gathered on the victims of child abuse. It is being categ
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