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Rose_chic99 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence gramatically correct?


When I try to embody the heroic adventures I read about though I quickly realize that they are made for a fantasy world because they usually wouldn’t work in ours.
  

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When I try to embody the heroic adventures I read about, though, I quickly realize that they are made for a fantasy world because they usually wouldn’t work in ours. )

— Eimai_Anglos

  • When I try to embody the heroic adventures I read about, though, I quickly realize that they are made for a fantasy world because they usually wouldn’t work in ours.
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When I try to embody the heroic adventures I read about, though, I quickly realize that they are made for a fantasy world because they usually wouldn’t work in ours.

(But I prefer "however" to "though".)
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And I'm not too happy with the split infinitive: "I quickly realize".
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Alright, thanks for your feedback.
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Eimai_Anglosthe split infinitive: "I quickly realize".
It's not a split infinitive.
to quickly realize would be a split infinitive.
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