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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence correctly written?
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Is this sentence correctly written?
The authority hereby informs that the committee met, within the Vilko administrative territory, Jimmy XX, the grandfather of Gemma XXX from her father’s, Jim XXX, side, whose declared place of residence is at [address].
Thank you!
Is this sentence correctly written?
The authority hereby informs that the committee met, within the Vilko administrative territory, Jimmy XX, the grandfather of Gemma XXX from her father’s, Jim XXX, side, whose declared place of residence is at [address].
Thank you!
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It is not quite clear. For example, who is "the authority"? That seems incomplete.
- It is not quite clear.
- For example, who is "the authority"?
- That seems incomplete.
- Also, "inform" requires a recipient.
- " Also, I would break this sentence up to make it less complicated.
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It is not quite clear. For example, who is "the authority"? That seems incomplete. Also, "inform" requires a recipient. (He informed Sheila that she was ugly.) So perhaps you want to use "declare." Also, I would break this sentence up to make it less complicated.
The Authority [?] hereby declares that the committee met with Jimmy XX within the Vilkno administrative territory.
The Authority [?] hereby declares that the committee met with Jimmy XX within the Vilkno administrative territory.
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