Is this sentence correctly worded, particularly the use of multiple 'who'?
However, the real mastermind was actually a powerful wizard named Jack, a gnome who had been trained by illithids and other powerful creatures and who had been secretly controlling Clan Karuck’s different shamans for centuries.
Top answer
Good
— Philip
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