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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence correctly worded or should I get rid of the comma?
The chieftain considered Riverwind’s belief in the old gods to be an affront to the tribe, and decreed that Riverwind could only wed Goldmoon if he found evidence of the existence of these gods.
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I would insert 'he' before 'decreed' to keep it from being just a mental pause.
- I would insert 'he' before 'decreed' to keep it from being just a mental pause.
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I would insert 'he' before 'decreed' to keep it from being just a mental pause.
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