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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Still a youth, he murdered his young lover in anger at the age of eighteen, and was exiled to the pre-Cataclysmic realm to the south that would later become known as Icereach.
  

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cboutin3 eighteen, and was exiled Unnecessary comma, here used as a "mental pause".

— Philip

  • cboutin3 eighteen, and was exiled Unnecessary comma, here used as a "mental pause".
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cboutin3eighteen, and was exiled
Unnecessary comma, here used as a "mental pause".
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