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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this sentence correctly worded?

Avondale’s forces even arrived in time to engage the armies of the Dark Queen from behind in a surprise assault while the aerial combat continued.
  

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Just to make it a little more readable, I would separate in a surprise assault with commas before and after. A comma after the phrase would be considered to be necessary by some.

  • Just to make it a little more readable, I would separate in a surprise assault with commas before and after.
  • A comma after the phrase would be considered to be necessary by some.
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Just to make it a little more readable, I would separate in a surprise assault with commas before and after. A comma after the phrase would be considered to be necessary by some.

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