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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct? Thanks

This is not required for the shipping order, your goods will be consolidated with our other supplier goods at HK once they are available, we will provide you the detail as soon as possible
  

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Hi, No. You need to break this into 3 separate sentences. If you try, we can comment further.

— Clive

  • Hi, No.
  • You need to break this into 3 separate sentences.
  • If you try, we can comment further.
  • Clive
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Hi,

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You need to break this into 3 separate sentences.

If you try, we can comment further.

Clive
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This is not required the shipping order. Your goods will be consolidated with our other supplier goods at HK once they are available. We will provide you the details as soon as possible.
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This is not required for the shipping order. Your goods will be consolidated with our other supplier goods at HK once they are available. We will provide you the details as soon as possible.
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Hi,

This is not required for the shipping order. Your goods will be consolidated with our other suppliers' goods at / in HK once they are available. We will provide you with the details as soon as possible.
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What am I—chopped liver? Clive's is one option; mine is another. 'Provide' need not take the preposition 'if', and 'supplier' as an adjective works as well as the possessive.
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