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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this sentence correct, thanks

We will change original planned, ship 500 pcs xx and 100 pcs xx this week. As per Ben requested, some Items need to rework.
  

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It is not clear what you want to say. So, no, this sentence is not correct. We will change original planned, ship 500 pcs xx and 100 pcs xx this week.

— Doctor D

  • It is not clear what you want to say.
  • So, no, this sentence is not correct.
  • We will change original planned, ship 500 pcs xx and 100 pcs xx this week.
  • As per Ben requested, some Items need to rework.
  • One interpretation: We will change our original plan and ship 500 pieces, beginning with 100 pieces this week.
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It is not clear what you want to say. So, no, this sentence is not correct.

We will change original planned, ship 500 pcs xx and 100 pcs xx this week. As per Ben requested, some Items need to rework.

One interpretation:

We will change our original plan and ship 500 pieces, beginning with 100 pieces this week. As Ben noted, some items need to be rewor
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