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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Is this sentence correct and clear? Thx in advance!

Hi,

Here is the sentence: Horses were trained on an oval dirt track (1600 meters long), harnessed to a light double-wheeled carts with a driver.

Regards,
Maria
  

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It's OK, but could stand some rearranging: Harnessed to a light double-wheeled carts with a driver, horses were trained on an oval dirt track 1600 meters around.

  • It's OK, but could stand some rearranging: Harnessed to a light double-wheeled carts with a driver, horses were trained on an oval dirt track 1600 meters around.
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It's OK, but could stand some rearranging:

Harnessed to a light double-wheeled carts with a driver, horses were trained on an oval dirt track 1600 meters around.

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