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Piano gray 814 Posted 6 years ago
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To resolve such problems, shareholders offer incentives to directors to align both their goals in the form of rewards for bringing about an acceptable level of return from business operations.

  

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piano gray 814 Is this sentence correct? Yes, but I think it would sound better if you had "align both of their goals". Otherwise, it sounds like it's going to be "align both their goals and their (something else)".

  • piano gray 814 Is this sentence correct?
  • Yes, but I think it would sound better if you had "align both of their goals".
  • Otherwise, it sounds like it's going to be "align both their goals and their (something else)".
  • CJ
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piano gray 814Is this sentence correct?

Yes, but I think it would sound better if you had "align both of their goals". Otherwise, it sounds like it's going to be "align both their goals and their (something else)".

CJ

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