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But then again, no one could have possibly imagined that all other heirs would have died so early, thereby making prince George next in line to ascend the throne.
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"Thereby" makes it sound like they died on purpose, and it is a tad redundant or something with "making". I would delete it: "But then again, no one could have possibly imagined that all other heirs would have died so early, making prince George next in line to ascend the throne.
- "Thereby" makes it sound like they died on purpose, and it is a tad redundant or something with "making".
- I would delete it: "But then again, no one could have possibly imagined that all other heirs would have died so early, making prince George next in line to ascend the throne.
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"Thereby" makes it sound like they died on purpose, and it is a tad redundant or something with "making". I would delete it: "But then again, no one could have possibly imagined that all other heirs would have died so early, making prince George next in line to ascend the throne.
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