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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Hi,

Is the following sentence correct?

"As an effect of attitude change and increased sensitivity, we can refer to Workers' noise annoyance after the intervention."

Thanks!

  

Top answer

Did the effect result in more annoyance or less? It's not clear to me. The phrase noise annoyance is not clear to me.

— Clive

  • Did the effect result in more annoyance or less?
  • It's not clear to me.
  • The phrase noise annoyance is not clear to me.
  • Are the workers making annoying noise, or are they annoyed by noise made by others?
  • Why have you used a capital 'W'?
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Did the effect result in more annoyance or less? It's not clear to me.


The phrase noise annoyance is not clear to me. Are the workers making annoying noise, or are they annoyed by noise made by others?

Why have you used a capital 'W'?

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