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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Is This Sentence Correct?

"After banning, the death rates will increase rapidly thus leading an advantageous life for people."

  

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That is not correct, and makes no sense at all.

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  • That is not correct, and makes no sense at all.
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That is not correct, and makes no sense at all.

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How can I correct it?

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After we ban smoking, the death rates will decrease (Sorry, I chose the wrong word above) thus leading an advantageous life for people.

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Okay I got it. I tried to mean " A better life" while using "advantageous"

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