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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

I don’t want this jacket; I wouldn’t be able to turn my head with this.

  

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It's OK. I'd delete 'with this'. Semi-colons are not used as much as you may think.

— Clive

  • It's OK.
  • I'd delete 'with this'.
  • Semi-colons are not used as much as you may think.
  • Here, I'd use a period, or perhaps say 'because'.
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It's OK.

I'd delete 'with this'.

Semi-colons are not used as much as you may think. Here, I'd use a period, or perhaps say 'because'.

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anonymous Is this sentence correct?

Yes, but it's unclear exactly what 'this' is. I'd make it more specific.

... to turn my head because of this collar.

or whatever feature of the jacket makes turning your head impossible.

CJ

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