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Is the underlined part correct?
"Regarding the IWS scale, it should be mentioned that its value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of other variables of the study."
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gillyflower Regarding the IWS scale, it should be mentioned that its value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of other variables of the study I cannot see what is underlined, but the sentence is certainly clunkier than it should be. Your reader will not have the patience to finish reading it. The IWS value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of the other variables.
- gillyflower Regarding the IWS scale, it should be mentioned that its value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of other variables of the study I cannot see what is underlined, but the sentence is certainly clunkier than it should be.
- Your reader will not have the patience to finish reading it.
- The IWS value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of the other variables.
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gillyflowerRegarding the IWS scale, it should be mentioned that its value was greater for females than males, confirming the results of other variables of the study
I cannot see what is underlined, but the sentence is certainly clunkier than it should be. Your reader will not have the patience to finish reading it.
The IWS value was greater for
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