Is this sentence correct?
Good morning, please see below sentence and tell me if anything needs to be corrected.
"Bryan, I have made a decision to no longer provide support to you in this department"
Thank you.
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I find "in this department" a bit confusing in the context. Do both you and Bryan work in the same department? Are you withdrawing support "in this department" but continuing it "outside this department".
- I find "in this department" a bit confusing in the context.
- Do both you and Bryan work in the same department?
- Are you withdrawing support "in this department" but continuing it "outside this department".
- I don't really understand the purpose of it.
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I find "in this department" a bit confusing in the context. Do both you and Bryan work in the same department? Are you withdrawing support "in this department" but continuing it "outside this department". I don't really understand the purpose of it.
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My version would be: I have decided not to provide support for you any longer.
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