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Krack Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is this sentence correct?

Hello, can you please look at this sentence and see if anything needs to be corrected.


I have observed that you are the type of individual who likes to act completely differently then his usual self when he is surrounded by peoples he is intimidated by.


Thank you for your assistance!

  

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" But it's not a great sentence--although it probably means that "when intimidated, your behaviour changes" it's ambiguous ... "

  • " But it's not a great sentence--although it probably means that "when intimidated, your behaviour changes" it's ambiguous ...
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"I have observed that you are the type of individual who likes to act completely differently than his usual self when he is surrounded by people he is intimidated by."

But it's not a great sentence--although it probably means that "when intimidated, your behaviour changes" it's ambiguous ... it's also possible to interpret this as "there's a way you usually behave wh

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