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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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Voice is important when we communicate with each other, but surprisingly, we seldom pay attention to or make full use of its power.
  

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teacherJapan Is this sentence correct? Yes, but you could polish it; revising by eliminating the unnecessary makes your viewpoint stronger: Voice is important when we communicate, but surprisingly, we seldom use its full power .

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  • teacherJapan Is this sentence correct?
  • Yes, but you could polish it; revising by eliminating the unnecessary makes your viewpoint stronger: Voice is important when we communicate, but surprisingly, we seldom use its full power .
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teacherJapanIs this sentence correct?
Yes, but you could polish it; revising by eliminating the unnecessary makes your viewpoint stronger:

Voice is important when we communicate, but surprisingly, we seldom use its full power.
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Wow!!!!!! It sure does sound stronger!! Wonderful!! Thank you very much:-)
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