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Gillyflower Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence correct?

Hello,
Is this sentence correct?

"hearing protection devices reduce the risk of hearing loss if correctly and permanently used by people in noisy workplaces."

Thanks!
  

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"Thanks! There are only a few small problems. 'permanently' and 'by people'.

— CalifJim

  • "Thanks!
  • There are only a few small problems.
  • 'permanently' and 'by people'.
  • Instead of 'permanently', you want a different word.
  • I suggest 'consistently', 'unfailingly', or 'routinely'.
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gillyflower Hello,Is this sentence correct?"Hearing protection devices reduce the risk of hearing loss if correctly and permanently used by people in noisy workplaces."Thanks!
There are only a few small problems. 'permanently' and 'by people'. Instead of 'permanently', you want a different word. I suggest 'consisten
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