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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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"He killed people who were cruel, but also killed who were sincere."

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He killed people who were cruel, but also killed those who were sincere. The contrast between "cruel" and "sincere" is not the most obvious one.

  • He killed people who were cruel, but also killed those who were sincere.
  • The contrast between "cruel" and "sincere" is not the most obvious one.
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He killed people who were cruel, but also killed those who were sincere.

The contrast between "cruel" and "sincere" is not the most obvious one.

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